Have I lost the creativity, or have I no one to sit by me and critique/collab with?

I've been soloing on these scripts for a while and have been stressing out on the fact that there is nobody here to volleyball ideas with. That, and I needed to update you guys on some things.

I have started the creation of a few new characters:
Haru Umehara - The mother of the Umehara Twins and the counselor of the school.
Jin Takenouchi - The owner of the neighborhood's infamous bakery, he is a renowned drug dealer and friend to Naoko.
Makoto Yamagata - The past Naoko's somewhat of a love interest, she is constantly rejected by him no matter what she throws at him. She had some sort of love complex with him since middle school.
Artwork by Tabbi